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In Blind Faith

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Under the endless sky,
I wait miserably.
For someone who will never see,
how much he means to me.
Written for the #Glory-Be-Project

I stumbled upon this great piece after browsing through my old works.... then I edited it a bit.
Originally it was supposed to be a part of an angsty story for a friend...


Hope you enjoyed it, though. :)
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Medoriko's avatar
Thank you for your submission to #ZealZone. I really enjoyed this poem a lot. It might be short line wise, but certainly not in meaning. I can picture someone star-gazing and letting her thoughts wander to the person she is seeking to be with, but is sadly invisible to. I think the fact that you kept it short and non complex, makes for very realistic piece that many can sympathize with. Lovely job.